Hey, guys! I started writing a short film, and I would love your thoughts on what I have so far. If it’s too dialogue heavy, if it’s too boring, etc., etc. Don’t be afraid to give constructive criticism! I take it with stride! Please enjoy and tell me what you think in the comments below! Thanks!
LOGLINE: Moxie indulges in the wish granted by her fairy job mother, but soon discovers that not every is coming up Moxie.